*snrk* LOL!!! I wondered how Morris would take to the situation

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"Why does everyone think Ill mess up just because I like to drive fast?" - Hotshot, Transformers: Cybertron

Geez, what a pervy wimp XD

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Now playing: Persona 4 (first run, Hard), Infinite Undiscovery (first run, Normal)

Hoping to play: Eternal Sonata and Tales of Vesperia (PS3)

Talk about finding the silver lining in a storm cloud XD

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It's fun to be a little bit crazy, but it is possible to take it so far. So please...don't be a punk...This is a public awareness announcement by the Association of Crazy People and Lunatics, or ACPL for short. We aren't mentally entertaining! ><;;

Heh! Nice way to take proper control of the situation, Sagittarius.
And despite knowing what those two ladies would do if he said that last line out loud... one has to admit, he has a point *ducks for cover*

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*snorts*

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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it, then copy and paste this in your signature.

I am a persian!

I like how you vary the backgrounds here by showing the one-way window in some of the panels. The light blue is great for breaking up all the orange-red.

There's something about the way you draw horse muzzles that I find really appealing. Virgo is such a pretty horsie.

Some nice foreshortening going on in almost every panel. It really pulls the reader in.

Morris' smirk in panel 4 is freaking awesome. A nice, understated reaction. I think if he had been all bug-eyed with his tongue hanging out, that would have been very cliche.

From a writing point of view, I don't think you need to go into so much detail about what characters are thinking, as in Morris' thought bubbles in panel 4. A lot of that kind of stuff can be conveyed through pose, expression, and gesture. This might be a problem for lesser artists, but I have no doubt that you can handle it. And I think there are times when it's more interesting to leave the reader wondering what the characters are thinking.

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Ski-in-ner with his crazy explanations
The Superintendent's gonna need his medication
When he hears Skinner's lame exaggerations
There'll be trouble in town tonight!

Ha ha Morris won the poll eh? Awsome work here

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"Are you stupid!? Everybody knows the more skin you show the better!"
Kittan, Gurran Lagann
"Damn! Haven't they ever heard of moderation !?"
Makoto Hyuga, EoE

I belive in Jesus Christ,Word up yo.

What a naughty boy he is. Lol!!

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Nice, Morris, nice.

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I am a hedge, move along. Nothing to see here.

Here there be dragons! [link]

Oh dear.

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